ZIP

perform life’s feat?
Zip line scares!
hanging like sheet…

need a drink
Indecisiveness not option
pushed to brink

flying over cedar
Parrots on repeat
guide’s my cheerleader

adventureother

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Sotto Poet

June 20, 2024 at 7:51 AM

Congratulations on your contest win, Kim

Sara Kendrick

June 20, 2024 at 5:27 AM

Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. I think I have waited too late in life to do a zip line even though it looks like fun. LOL.. Sara K

Kim Rodrigues

June 20, 2024 at 7:19 AM

For me, I wouldn’t call it fun, but an accomplishment. My favorite was zipping to the beach though the height I had to jump off of was scary but zipping over the ocean was not.

David Crandall

June 19, 2024 at 7:32 PM

Wow you are braver than me Kim - good job!

Kim Rodrigues

June 20, 2024 at 7:19 AM

Thank you, David! Much appreciated!

William Kelii Kekaula

June 19, 2024 at 9:47 AM

Kim: Intrigued by your daring-do and witticism too, my friend. Aloha for your participation, William

Kim Rodrigues

June 19, 2024 at 4:20 PM

Thank you for my placement! Smiling! Enjoyed the contest!

Abdullah Alhemaidy

May 5, 2024 at 6:16 PM

New & interesting poem!

Kim Rodrigues

May 5, 2024 at 9:53 PM

Thank you, Abdullah!

Silent One

May 5, 2024 at 9:09 AM

Interesting form, dear Kim..

Kim Rodrigues

May 5, 2024 at 10:30 AM

Thank you, our dear William (Hilo Poet) has a contest with his poetry form. You should check it out! Blessings ~ Kim

Hilda Greenhough

May 5, 2024 at 7:16 AM

It sounds like fun. I like the free, wild, energetic style of your poem. I'll put zip line on my wish list.

Kim Rodrigues

May 5, 2024 at 10:33 AM

I did it three times. It was never on my wish list but my husband wanted to do it. On two of them I broke out in tears. My first time was in Antigua, a brand new zip line. On my last one I just had to have courage to leap from the topmost point then zipped over the beach. Once I stepped off I loved it, got lower and lower…no worries. Hope you try ~ Kim <3

Duke Beaufort

May 5, 2024 at 5:54 AM

Kim, I feel like I am on a wire while reading this. Very realistic feeling and sentiments. How many situations do we find ourselves in that trigger these feelings?

Kim Rodrigues

May 5, 2024 at 10:36 AM

Truly! I guess the remembrance that we survived could help us when the proverbial bottom drops out.

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