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perform life’s feat? Zip line scares! hanging like sheet… need a drink Indecisiveness not option pushed to brink flying over cedar Parrots on repeat guide’s my cheerleader

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Date: 6/20/2024 7:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your contest win, Kim
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Date: 6/20/2024 5:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. I think I have waited too late in life to do a zip line even though it looks like fun. LOL.. Sara K
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/20/2024 7:19:00 AM
For me, I wouldn’t call it fun, but an accomplishment. My favorite was zipping to the beach though the height I had to jump off of was scary but zipping over the ocean was not.
Date: 6/19/2024 7:32:00 PM
Wow you are braver than me Kim - good job!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/20/2024 7:19:00 AM
Thank you, David! Much appreciated!
Date: 6/19/2024 9:47:00 AM
Kim: Intrigued by your daring-do and witticism too, my friend. Aloha for your participation, William
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/19/2024 4:20:00 PM
Thank you for my placement! Smiling! Enjoyed the contest!
Date: 5/5/2024 6:16:00 PM
New & interesting poem!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/5/2024 9:53:00 PM
Thank you, Abdullah!
Date: 5/5/2024 9:09:00 AM
Interesting form, dear Kim..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/5/2024 10:30:00 AM
Thank you, our dear William (Hilo Poet) has a contest with his poetry form. You should check it out! Blessings ~ Kim
Date: 5/5/2024 7:16:00 AM
It sounds like fun. I like the free, wild, energetic style of your poem. I'll put zip line on my wish list.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/5/2024 10:33:00 AM
I did it three times. It was never on my wish list but my husband wanted to do it. On two of them I broke out in tears. My first time was in Antigua, a brand new zip line. On my last one I just had to have courage to leap from the topmost point then zipped over the beach. Once I stepped off I loved it, got lower and lower…no worries. Hope you try ~ Kim <3
Date: 5/5/2024 5:54:00 AM
Kim, I feel like I am on a wire while reading this. Very realistic feeling and sentiments. How many situations do we find ourselves in that trigger these feelings?
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/5/2024 10:36:00 AM
Truly! I guess the remembrance that we survived could help us when the proverbial bottom drops out.

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