Zigzagging

The mind flits left to right
Like a moth to the light
Forward and back seem so simple
Appearing as immutable principle
Doubt rears its ugly head
Then we try the opposite instead

Thinking stuck in the primal abyss
Leaping out to a false premise
Landing on a non sequitur
Sillogisms flying past in a blur
The quid pro quo one can't deny
Shows logic that we all decry
Aristotle would be exasperated
While the duplicitous are vindicated

Go through two doors at the same time
Prove it's not shorter to use a straight line
Flighty creatures that we are
When we wish upon a star
Twin deceivers are zig and zag
Truth can evade like boast and brag

Some thinkers think to bend not break
Especially with crucial issues at stake
Forever we're swerving to get so far
And that's the truth of how we are
Mostly unsure of what we know
Off zigzagging we blithely go
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Ibeh Avatar
January 18, 2020 at 3:56 PM
Really fabulous piece, Greg:-) Congrats!
Gaul Avatar
January 18, 2020 at 6:28 PM
So kind of you to visit and comment. Congrats to you as well on your high placement. Your work gets a lot of respect. Well earned.
Chiri Avatar
January 18, 2020 at 2:39 PM
Congratulations on your win!;)
Gaul Avatar
January 18, 2020 at 3:06 PM
Thanks Brenda for your visit and comment. Congrats too to you for your sultry foray with Helen. Hot poetic hugs around.
Gauthier Avatar
October 14, 2018 at 12:58 PM
Congrats on your top win, Greg. Well penned.
Gaul Avatar
October 14, 2018 at 6:47 PM
Thanks Line for your kind comments. Much appreciated.
Palli Avatar
September 4, 2018 at 1:12 PM
Clever one! So true. Enjoyed.
Gaul Avatar
September 4, 2018 at 7:27 PM
Thanks so much Susan. Sometimes the simple things ring true.
Gentry Avatar
August 26, 2018 at 2:06 AM
I like this. Witty and lighthearted with a serious undertone. Well-written and thought-provoking. :)
Gaul Avatar
August 26, 2018 at 5:25 PM
Susan, thanks for your thoughtful comments. You have had a nice run of awards recently yourself. Most deserved. Your kindness is contagious. Be well.
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