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zero gravity please put me down atlas ~ nobody takes us serious anymore

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Gary Radice

Date: 9/24/2022 8:22:00 AM

Excellent David. As the spectre of nuclear war once again raises its ugly head I think your monoku is seriously apt.

David Kavanagh
Date: 9/24/2022 9:48:00 AM

Thank you Gary, Precarious times indeed, I’m just glad the west has a huge nuclear deterrent for Putin, if things really get out of hand, I’m on holiday at the moment, hence my absence from the soup, I’m just checking in every now and then, hopefully can get back to reading and writing some poems in a few weeks time, cheers David

Michael Tor

Date: 9/14/2022 2:04:00 AM

David this is a favorite for what you convey. A true pleasure to read. Congratulations...

David Kavanagh
Date: 9/14/2022 2:16:00 AM

You’re too kind Michael, I so appreciate the Fav, yes indeed a big message for mankind, thank you, cheers David

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 9/13/2022 1:19:00 PM

And my back is killing me Seriously Nice 1 David I wrote a poem called Ok Sherlock Computer Friendly I am hoping you may like it and will be up your street please will you read it

David Kavanagh
Date: 9/13/2022 2:35:00 PM

Who’d be Atlas, who’d be a planet, only a human imagination of course, we (intelligence) have changed the balance and order of the earth, who put that chip in our heads, cheers David

Mike Gentile

Date: 9/12/2022 8:57:00 AM

As we all feel the weight of our world in its current state, you said so much in your one line! Well done David!

David Kavanagh
Date: 9/12/2022 10:44:00 AM

Thanks Mike, we’re really heading into uncharted waters, so far as the earth is concerned, I was parodying our feeble attempts to try sort it out, cheers David

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/8/2022 2:19:00 PM

So true David, when you look at mankind with greed and sensless wars you wonder where did we go wrong. Tom

David Kavanagh
Date: 9/8/2022 2:42:00 PM

Intelligence me thinks was the game changer Tom, some insidious part of it seems to have driven humanity crazy with greed, and hunger for power no matter what the cost, wars just follow it around, cheers David

L Milton Hankins

Date: 9/8/2022 9:20:00 AM

I like this, David. It certainly is food for thought. Thanks for sharing it.

David Kavanagh
Date: 9/8/2022 10:07:00 AM

Thank you Milton, no joking here, only a despondent earth, and who knows perhaps a god just trying to do his best, cheers David