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Zero Friction

Olympian speed
Tortise and hare race for gold
Disqualified, rage


Anybody watch the Olympics?

Inspired by a poem by Sara Kendrick this morning!! Thanks for the inspiration mom.

sportshaiku

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 3/19/2010 3:20:00 AM

The good Ole Hare and the Tortoise! Smiles. Doris, reading your poetry this morning has been a wonderful way to start the day. Thank you for sharing your words. And thank you for your most welcome recent comments on my poetry. Have a super Day! Lovingly, Dane Ann

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/25/2010 12:37:00 PM

Doris, I don't know what this haiku refers to in the recent Olympics, but I enjoyed it and will have to check out SAra's. No, I don't watch Olympics. I am too tied up with things like the bachelor, survivor, Lost, Grey's antatomy, and on and on and on. hahaha. If you ever want sonnet help, just call out! LUv, andrea

Amy Thompson

Date: 2/25/2010 8:53:00 AM

Dear Doris, thanks for your nice comment on my poem, His Violin. My father played the violin very well, but I never became much good. However, it’s still my favourite instrument. I enjoyed your haiku about the Olympics. It’s very timely and well done. Love, Amy.

Jared Pickett

Date: 2/25/2010 7:49:00 AM

I watched snowboarding, slolam, and speed skating..... Good work Doris.....:JP]

Brian Strand

Date: 2/25/2010 7:28:00 AM

Thank you for your welcome blog comments today Doris.Rgds Brian

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/25/2010 7:10:00 AM

Saw the Korean skaters get disqualified, Doris. The US team came in last, appeared to put forth little effort and still took the bronze. This event made for some hard feelings. Enjoyed your poem -- so timely now! Love, Carolyn PS -- keep cheering for the amazing US Hockey Team!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/25/2010 5:19:00 AM

Interesting idea to relate to the picture. Keep the creative pen flowing. Soup...Mom

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/25/2010 5:13:00 AM

Luv Luv Luv these Olympics.. what a great Haiku Doris to tribute all and u have captured the essence... thankxxx for sharing... I posted a blog a few days ago on poetry if u care to take a look and comment.. would appreciate.. luv.. Linda-Marie

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