Sara Kendrick Poet Rhyme

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Zephyr of Higher Learning

The vernacular language that I use
Slips into my writing also and can confuse
Those from other countries and regions
Sometimes my language is macabre
 
For I slaughter the English language
From the teachings of my upbringing
And also from the family and associations
My language patterns have taken formation

I wish that the zephyr of higher learning
Could sweep across and saturate me
With an instant knowledge of a broader
Vocabulary and grammar so that writing

Would become an eloquent and easy
Part of my life gracing me with flowery
Words that would bless each heart
That reads my work consuming each morsel

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Jack Horne October 11, 2011 at 4:40 PM LOL, I'm sure you never slaughter the English language! Love this witty and thoughtful piece

John Freeman July 8, 2010 at 10:46 AM I know this would not be the case with you, of course Sara. But many folks are stuck up in their hoods of educated mentality. So tragic, they can't find any of mercy's wisdom of heart. Smile, Agape, Moses

Doris Culverhouse July 6, 2010 at 5:18 AM enjoyed this one mom, I think all authors would have these feelings at times. Your work is great to me!! did you see my poem is she the one, I dedicated to you?

Michael Gelb July 5, 2010 at 12:23 PM As I had said prior I can't understand lots of poems. And my dictionary is'nt big enough for some of these words.

Joseph Spence Sr July 5, 2010 at 11:34 AM Dear Sara, poetry should not be about a specific dialect; that is restricting. Poetry has no bounds or borders. It flows across hills, valleys, oceans, and lands. It appeals to all cultures, norms, and civilizations. Just keep writing, and write as your spirit moves you. Mix up the words if that is your desire and just let them flow connotatively. You can do it with style and grace; go for it! Great expressions! Joseph

C.C Bloomsfield July 5, 2010 at 9:48 AM Your words are always a blessing,sweet friend!C

Carolyn Devonshire July 5, 2010 at 8:13 AM I've never noticed a lack of good vocabulary in your poems, Sara. You use language well to express your thoughts. Love, Carolyn