Dr.Ram Mehta Poet Lanterne

Zephyr

Breeze
Makes her
Feel well when
Drapery swell in
Air.
Soft touch
She a blush
He an ocean
Breeze


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N.B.The contest Poetic Palindrome requires to write two Lanternes  with the last word of
Lanterne one and first word of the second Lanterne should be one. That's why there are nine lines instead of ten lines

Dr. Ram Mehta
19-10-13

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John Posey October 31, 2013 at 8:34 PM I admire your use of varied forms... It convinces me that you attempt to be a serious poet..... You meet the challenge well..... Regards... Jake Dr.Ram Mehta October 31, 2013 at 8:44 PM Thanks, I have attempted nearly 92 literary poetic forms till date

Charmaine Chircop October 23, 2013 at 7:21 AM Soft and beautiful!

Bl Devnath October 20, 2013 at 9:38 AM Natural rhythm is flashed from breeze to breeze. Good luck, my friend. Loved always, bl

Shadow Hamilton October 20, 2013 at 8:17 AM not a form I know but the words flow beautifully Richard much enjoyed reading Shadow x smile

Shanity Rain October 20, 2013 at 12:45 AM This is a win to me ! I love it Doc, the simplicity , beautiful write .