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zephyr

zephyr fluffs pampas grass, chilling its green sharp leaves.... red oak leaves coat lawn
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Kerr Avatar
November 17, 2025 at 7:46 AM
Hello Sara, Such amazing colours depicted and lyrical word choice reflected in this scholarly Haiku. As for your comments on Seam, they are so appreciated by me, Howard
Kendrick Avatar
November 17, 2025 at 10:57 AM
Appreciation goes without saying in this uplifting review of my work, Howard. I like using color in life and in poems. Sara K
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 4, 2025 at 6:18 PM
outstanding imagery and melodious words...a delight to read, Sara K!
Kendrick Avatar
November 5, 2025 at 3:31 AM
Why, thank you, Sara B. I appreciate the visit. Sara K.
Rolland Avatar
November 3, 2025 at 6:54 PM
delicious poem, with melody of words, enjoyed
Kendrick Avatar
November 4, 2025 at 3:05 AM
Why, thank you, Yann. I appreciate your uplifting comments. Sara K
Rodrigues Avatar
November 3, 2025 at 4:05 PM
Nice use of pampas!
Kendrick Avatar
November 4, 2025 at 3:04 AM
Why, thank you, Kim. I took Cody somewhere and stopped at the end of our driveway for Cody to see if the mail had been delivered. There was a very swift wind coming directly from the west and that triggered the thought. Sara K
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