zenith hiku
For Sir Brian Strand's 1404 Poetry Contest
15 August 2025
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v \ | / t’ s wreath at noontide, o
.\ | /. g h e s t p
-- \|/ -- i
---- * ---- flame flows from the h
-- /|\ --
./ | \.
/ | \ time takes its d
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