David Crandall Poet Rhyme

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For Bite Size Contest no127 Poetry Contest sponsored by Line Gauthier 

 

Zenith

One grand day when I was young,
'twas then Godzilla fought King Kong.
Existence reached its highest rung,
but, in that, something was so wrong. 
Of Cocoa Puffs, I'd had my fill,
but the future was downhill.

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sara Etgen-Baker October 28, 2025 at 3:09 PM ah, a Cocoa Puff childhood to that of disallusioned adulthood. You said quite a bit in just a few well-placed words. Faving David Crandall November 3, 2025 at 6:22 PM Thanks, Sara!

Paula Goldsmith October 27, 2025 at 11:49 AM What a creative/fun write you have here. Love It... Maybe the problem was you needed to give Cocoa Puffs to your friends Godzilla and King Kong. Hahaha!!!! Have a fun day writing away............... David Crandall October 27, 2025 at 2:32 PM That's brilliant! Since I already had enough, and that would probably make Godzilla and King Kong happy so they wouldn't fight anymore. That would be the best ever!