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You'Ve Taken Over My Poetry

Now that you've completely taken over my soul You've also taken over my poetry Everything I write is inspired by our love My focus is always you and me My inspiration, my brightest star in the sky I'm the luckiest man on earth How come I've been blessed with a beautiful love A lady so sweet with such mirth I'm totally amazed at how similar we are Bout how we think true love should be This over the top commitment to each other Yet still have this feeling of free With over seven billion people in the world I'm wondering if we're unique Probably not but it sure has that feeling At the statistics I'd sure like to peek No matter what they prove it feels that way Like it's never ever happened before The luckiest two people on the face of the earth So honoured I can say I'm yours

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Date: 5/22/2023 10:55:00 PM
You two were meant for each other. god bless you both Jack...
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Jack Ellison
Date: 5/23/2023 4:19:00 AM
Yup! Still hanging in there! "How come I've been blessed with this beautiful love"? Lucky I guess... cheers Michael!
Date: 5/13/2023 5:29:00 PM
...a goodt read.....a writ wrote right on : ) ......stan
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Jack Ellison
Date: 5/14/2023 4:08:00 AM
Still hanging around Mr. Stan Cheers!
Date: 5/13/2023 8:37:00 AM
A real love poem, Jack! We should all be so lucky. A pleasure to read you today my friend. Hoping all is well with you and yours:)
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Jack Ellison
Date: 5/13/2023 4:21:00 PM
Hope you and your new lady friend are so happy for many years to come Dan! Happy days ahead!

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