You'Ve Lost Me

Dont read into what i say and do
Trust that deep inside im just like you
We don't agree on each every word
But just the idea of it's totally absurd
I don't claim perfection in myself
But just for this i'm put on the shelf? 
Happily you point out all my faults
While my retorts I shut up in vaults
I dismiss what you say as valid remarks
For the pain I caused has left its marks
But someday you might stop and see
The hurt kept in is why you've lost me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 21, 2010 at 10:11 AM
I am enjoying reading poems here this morning at PoetrySoup. I am glad you shared your writing with us today Not. Have a wonderful weekend filled with love, good health and lots of inspiration. Love, Carol
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