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Youthful reverie

Seventeen candles on her cake
the world awaits with all it offers
~ a bouquet of budding dreams



Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: Honorable Mention 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 22, 2025 at 4:31 PM
ahhh, to be 17 again :-)
Gauthier Avatar
September 22, 2025 at 6:06 PM
Not sure I'd have the energy to go through it all again ~ lol
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