Youthful Fields of Summer (Haiku)

Youthful summer fields; 
fragrant scents of wildflowers, 
beneath trees of green




Comments: Inspired by a portrait of a little boy sniffing a single bloom while standing in a field of wildflowers.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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September 23, 2008 at 1:42 PM
Wht a wonderful scene. Nice use of this short format to paint a picture with words. I enjoyed it. Karen
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August 26, 2008 at 3:02 PM
A beautiful and delicate picture. Absolutely stunning. Regards Heidie
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August 25, 2008 at 3:39 PM
Beautiful. Especially love the first line. Love, Shar
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August 25, 2008 at 12:37 PM
A soft and sweet poem. Can almost see the portrait in my mind! Best wishes...Carrie
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August 25, 2008 at 12:13 PM
Whatever the inspiration, this is so clear and so well composed. Perfect form and flow. Very wel written. Michael
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