Yous From the Mes

You can't have a storm without the 
rain,
You won't experience love without 
the pain.
You'll never run if you weren't taught 
to walk,
You will never listen if you don't learn 
how to talk.
Through the eyes of yourself life's 
lessons you'll learn,
If you soak up the knowledge you'll 
know which way to turn.
If you take a wrong turn you can 
choose to turn back,
If you keep on going your 
responsible for the slack.
The instruction book for life is 
written by you,
When you take direction and do what 
you do.
Noone can tell you how to travel your 
road,
But you can learn from their 
wisdoms to lighten the load.
your mistakes will be published in 
the troubleshooting page,
You can refer back to them for the 
rest of your days.
If you choose to ignore them and 
pretend they're not written,
Then expect to go backwards once 
again and be bitten.
If your smart you will learn from 
another ones sorrows,
Not mimicking their moves will 
benefit your tomorrows.
Take a leaf from their book but dont 
take the whole tree,
Because the branches separate the 
you's from the me's.


Carly Chambers :D

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 1/16/2024 1:10:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 9/9/2015 2:01:00 PM
Carly, thank you for sharing. A pleasure to read... SKAT
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Date: 3/28/2014 10:50:00 AM
If only human being would learn from the older generation what works and what doesn't but alas that doesn't always happen.Enjoyed reading your enlighting work today..Welcome to soup..Sara
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Date: 3/17/2014 6:25:00 PM
welcome to poetrysoup, there is a lot of wisdom in this poem ...interested to see what else you write...
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Date: 3/17/2014 9:44:00 AM
Lovely poem Carly, and the final 4 lines say it all. // paul
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