Yours Me

Amidst the amazing aroma of the angelic sticks
Cheering along the chants of charismatic priests
Promising on the petals of pearly purity 
You said, "I LOVE YOU" 

During the dreadful dreams of dying waves
Glancing through the glass of dry gloomy grass
Lifting me up into the light of lively land
You said "I LOVE YOU" 

Fondling my feathery feet with your fancy fingers
Twisting your tangy thumb into my twirled curls
Scrawling your signature on my splendid smile
You said "I LOVE YOU" 

Searching for the sensibility behind the madness of your words
Enjoying the ecstasy of our bond enriched with folly fights
Roistering the roller coaster ride at the royal stage of your vivacity 
I solemnly stoop before your solicitude to say, 
I LIVE FOR YOU. 

Prick up your ears my darling 
Open wide your eyes my poppet
Unlock the hatch of your heart my swain 

Look into my eyes, 
Slide deep into my nerves,
Feel the warmth of my blood
You will realise that 
I AM ALL YOURS.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

U.D Palawon  Avatar
February 11, 2019 at 4:26 AM
Wonderfully carved ideas which manifests into words to bring exquisite imagery. Patience and bliss all mingled.Keep it Up!:D Sunita
Vangaveti Avatar
February 11, 2019 at 10:01 PM
Your words are so encouraging. Thank you so much. Have a great week ahead :)
Rodrigues Avatar
January 27, 2019 at 7:02 AM
The first verses rhythmical like the sea’s waves with great imagery! The next to last verse quickens the pulse, gets our attention and then comes the warmth of the final verse. Nicely done, Swetha! Welcome to PS!
Vangaveti Avatar
January 27, 2019 at 9:06 AM
Thank you so much Kim :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 23, 2019 at 10:19 PM
Sigh, sigh, and sighing more! Chills and thrills form this gem! : )
Vangaveti Avatar
January 26, 2019 at 11:50 PM
And your comment made my day. :)
Rose  Avatar
January 23, 2019 at 7:42 AM
Ah, too good for words, I'm not going to cheapen this masterpiece by my meager comment, I love it, dear, have a wonderful day, Bless your wonderfully made heart. xo
Vangaveti Avatar
January 26, 2019 at 11:49 PM
Aww.. that means a lot :)
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace