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Amidst the amazing aroma of the angelic sticks Cheering along the chants of charismatic priests Promising on the petals of pearly purity You said, "I LOVE YOU" During the dreadful dreams of dying waves Glancing through the glass of dry gloomy grass Lifting me up into the light of lively land You said "I LOVE YOU" Fondling my feathery feet with your fancy fingers Twisting your tangy thumb into my twirled curls Scrawling your signature on my splendid smile You said "I LOVE YOU" Searching for the sensibility behind the madness of your words Enjoying the ecstasy of our bond enriched with folly fights Roistering the roller coaster ride at the royal stage of your vivacity I solemnly stoop before your solicitude to say, I LIVE FOR YOU. Prick up your ears my darling Open wide your eyes my poppet Unlock the hatch of your heart my swain Look into my eyes, Slide deep into my nerves, Feel the warmth of my blood You will realise that I AM ALL YOURS.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 2/11/2019 4:26:00 AM
Wonderfully carved ideas which manifests into words to bring exquisite imagery. Patience and bliss all mingled.Keep it Up!:D Sunita
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Swetha Vangaveti
Date: 2/11/2019 10:01:00 PM
Your words are so encouraging. Thank you so much. Have a great week ahead :)
Date: 1/27/2019 7:02:00 AM
The first verses rhythmical like the sea’s waves with great imagery! The next to last verse quickens the pulse, gets our attention and then comes the warmth of the final verse. Nicely done, Swetha! Welcome to PS!
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Swetha Vangaveti
Date: 1/27/2019 9:06:00 AM
Thank you so much Kim :)
Date: 1/23/2019 10:19:00 PM
Sigh, sigh, and sighing more! Chills and thrills form this gem! : )
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Swetha Vangaveti
Date: 1/26/2019 11:50:00 PM
And your comment made my day. :)
Date: 1/23/2019 7:42:00 AM
Ah, too good for words, I'm not going to cheapen this masterpiece by my meager comment, I love it, dear, have a wonderful day, Bless your wonderfully made heart. xo
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Swetha Vangaveti
Date: 1/26/2019 11:49:00 PM
Aww.. that means a lot :)