Yours Love

(Fibonacci + rhyme + senryu + Acrostic + Tanka + etheree)



I,
Felt,
Your love,
Blind in fun,
Dipped in passion,
Wrapped in sensational lust
Outcome of silent regrets and deep frustrations, yet,

I believed in your trust,
For which I was blind,
I Believed in you crust,
For which I was kind,

I believed in your touch,
For which I was needy,
I believed in you as such,
For which I was termed as greedy

But my belief was incessant,
Atrociously fighting within me,
And at one point of remnant,
I wrote this following slogan to see

Carcass of Love boils,
Melting trust fades away fast,
Rain falls on died hope.

You gave me that slogan,
Outbursts of incessant tears,
Ugly truth of love elates,
Rousing death of false fears,

Left with lone voices of self,
Outrageously laughing on my will,
Vivaciously broken heart kneels,
Encouragement falls below in thrill,


Thrilling thrill of thrill,
This thrills a fearful dead soul,
Waits like an orphan,

Homeless and even heartless,
Writing in piece of paper

I,
Wrote with,
A belief,
To meet again,
In same waves of lust,
But now with open eyes,
Converting into trust of heart,
In silence of worthy dead mob,
I hope for a light of love that stays
My heart still waits for your passionate fun

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 6/21/2013 2:37:00 AM
- A beautiful love poem Diwakar, written with loving words and consideration. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/21/2013 5:23:00 AM
Thank you :-)
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