You're the Walker

On morning walks, I pass by
Certain people every day,
But rarely do we say hello;
It’s not the New York way.

Occasionally, breakthroughs
May result in first a nod,
Then perhaps a wave or “Morning!” shout
Or not, which isn’t odd.

One woman greets me warmly now,
Yet there were many years
When she wouldn’t even catch my eye;
Who knows why she switched gears?

A runner I see frequently
Will give a sideways glance
But won’t take it to the nodding stage
In this strange New York dance.

This afternoon, though, as I strolled
In Sotheby’s,* viewing art,
I spotted a familiar face
And blurted, with a start – 

“Hey – you’re the runner!” He turned ‘round
And broke into a smile.
“And you’re the walker!” he replied;
We knew each other’s style.

“We could discuss this further
In the morning, but we move
In the opposite direction;”
(Since we’re in our a.m. groove).

The whole encounter felt like
Just how New York stories go
And the next time when our paths cross
Guaranteed, we’ll say hello.

*the famous auction house
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Borke Avatar
September 22, 2025 at 7:27 AM
There’s something so good about this poem. Im not sure how to explain it in just a few words
Bauer Avatar
September 22, 2025 at 3:39 PM
Thank you, Hannah! I appreciate and really like that comment…
Greenhough Avatar
September 21, 2025 at 7:52 PM
I hope you made a friend. At least you broke the ice.
Bauer Avatar
September 22, 2025 at 3:40 PM
More like an acquaintance, Hilda, but that’s good enough for me. Thanks for reaching out…
Wolf Avatar
September 21, 2025 at 6:58 PM
Gosh. It seems you've made your peace with sch an unfriendly city. So different from many neighborhoods in Chicago... I'd go NUTS in NYC. You are a lot tougher than I am, Ilene.
Bauer Avatar
September 22, 2025 at 3:42 PM
It doesn’t really feel unfriendly to me - more just minding one’s own business. There are many people to say hello to, but it takes a while to cross over into actual friendships…
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