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You're my EVERYTHING

This is not my WORLD. You're my WORLD. You're my EVERYTHING. You're the FLOWERS, the GRASS, You're my THOUGHTS, You're my EVERYTHING. This is not my WORLD. You're my WORLD. So now..... be part of my..... LOVE. *please comment if you don't mind, i'd really like to know your thoughts (fav poem if you like)* -Angel4eva23

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Date: 4/5/2011 3:04:00 PM
You give such warm messages in your poetry.. that is a good thing....I figured I would start on your first poem... always Michael
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Date: 9/13/2010 5:49:00 AM
Your everything must feel like royalty after this exceptional piece.... Wonderful poetry my friend.... If you liked my Triple Haiku poem you should read my Mushroom Red Marks..... Good work dear....:JP]
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Date: 9/6/2010 7:27:00 AM
When I read your poem, I heard a song. Work on a melody. it's good.
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