You'Re My Everything

This is not my WORLD.

           You're my WORLD.

           You're my EVERYTHING.

           You're the FLOWERS, the GRASS, 

           You're my THOUGHTS,

           You're my EVERYTHING.
            
           This is not my WORLD.
           You're my WORLD.
                     
          So now.....
                be part of my.....
                                    LOVE.



                  *please comment if you don't mind, i'd really like to know your thoughts (fav poem if you like)*
                                                  
                                                            -Angel4eva23
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Falotico Avatar
April 5, 2011 at 3:04 PM
You give such warm messages in your poetry.. that is a good thing....I figured I would start on your first poem... always Michael
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September 13, 2010 at 5:49 AM
Your everything must feel like royalty after this exceptional piece.... Wonderful poetry my friend.... If you liked my Triple Haiku poem you should read my Mushroom Red Marks..... Good work dear....:JP]
Hackett Avatar
September 6, 2010 at 7:27 AM
When I read your poem, I heard a song. Work on a melody. it's good.
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