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You'Re My Everything

This is not my WORLD. You're my WORLD. You're my EVERYTHING. You're the FLOWERS, the GRASS, You're my THOUGHTS, You're my EVERYTHING. This is not my WORLD. You're my WORLD. So now..... be part of my..... LOVE. *please comment if you don't mind, i'd really like to know your thoughts (fav poem if you like)* -Angel4eva23

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Michael J. Falotico

Date: 4/5/2011 3:04:00 PM

You give such warm messages in your poetry.. that is a good thing....I figured I would start on your first poem... always Michael

Jared Pickett

Date: 9/13/2010 5:49:00 AM

Your everything must feel like royalty after this exceptional piece.... Wonderful poetry my friend.... If you liked my Triple Haiku poem you should read my Mushroom Red Marks..... Good work dear....:JP]

Allen Hackett

Date: 9/6/2010 7:27:00 AM

When I read your poem, I heard a song. Work on a melody. it's good.