Red Fiery Poet I do not know?

Your Words

A voice I wish to hear from the other side
               Your words ran deep into my isolated heart
                  Like the first drop of rain,
                        A gift to ease the pain
                           I hope we meet , I hope we talk
                              Along the riverside as we walk
                                 to give voice to our thoughts 





                                                    RED

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Lucilla Carrillo September 9, 2013 at 9:39 AM A very nice poem indeed. Thanks for sharing.....Lucilla

Liam Mcdaid September 8, 2013 at 11:18 AM SUCH A SWEET AND BEAUTIFUL PIECE

Dan Kearley August 29, 2013 at 12:48 AM Well.... Your back again. All right! Nice to see you again. :o)

Poet Tacito August 14, 2013 at 10:49 AM Touching & intense. "Talk", "Walk", "Thoughts"...in the "rain". Very, very key factors when expressing the heart from within.

Richard Lamoureux August 14, 2013 at 7:03 AM See my response to your comment on my poem "If Only I Loved Myself"

Richard Lamoureux August 14, 2013 at 6:39 AM Yes now it is perfect. Well done.

Saanvi Dua August 14, 2013 at 4:58 AM enjoyed stopping by !! Love , Saanvi :))))))))

Christine Phillips August 14, 2013 at 3:49 AM Nice romantic poem. I enjoy reading it.

Anne-Lise Andresen August 14, 2013 at 1:47 AM - So beautifully written my smiling friend Red! - A great start to my day! - Have a nice day! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Red Fiery August 14, 2013 at 1:58 AM Thank u Anne:)

Richard Lamoureux August 13, 2013 at 12:41 PM A very beautiful verse. I might consider something besides whitewash as that would only touch the surface, perhaps. A gift to ease the pain. Way to go Red! I can't say that I'm surprised I expected nothing less. Fly little bird fly! Red Fiery August 14, 2013 at 2:01 AM I have already edited ....little bird is flying again:)

Charmaine Chircop August 13, 2013 at 8:42 AM Very romantic verses : )Charma Red Fiery August 14, 2013 at 2:01 AM thank you dear poetess :)