Your Words

A voice I wish to hear from the other side
               Your words ran deep into my isolated heart
                  Like the first drop of rain,
                        A gift to ease the pain
                           I hope we meet , I hope we talk
                              Along the riverside as we walk
                                 to give voice to our thoughts 





                                                    RED

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Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 9/9/2013 9:39:00 AM

A very nice poem indeed. Thanks for sharing.....Lucilla

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 9/8/2013 11:18:00 AM

SUCH A SWEET AND BEAUTIFUL PIECE

Dan Kearley

Date: 8/29/2013 12:48:00 AM

Well.... Your back again. All right! Nice to see you again. :o)

Poet Tacito

Date: 8/14/2013 10:49:00 AM

Touching & intense. "Talk", "Walk", "Thoughts"...in the "rain". Very, very key factors when expressing the heart from within.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/14/2013 7:03:00 AM

See my response to your comment on my poem "If Only I Loved Myself"

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/14/2013 6:39:00 AM

Yes now it is perfect. Well done.

Saanvi Dua

Date: 8/14/2013 4:58:00 AM

enjoyed stopping by !! Love , Saanvi :))))))))

Christine Phillips

Date: 8/14/2013 3:49:00 AM

Nice romantic poem. I enjoy reading it.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/14/2013 1:47:00 AM

- So beautifully written my smiling friend Red! - A great start to my day! - Have a nice day! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Red Fiery
Date: 8/14/2013 1:58:00 AM

Thank u Anne:)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/13/2013 12:41:00 PM

A very beautiful verse. I might consider something besides whitewash as that would only touch the surface, perhaps. A gift to ease the pain. Way to go Red! I can't say that I'm surprised I expected nothing less. Fly little bird fly!

Red Fiery
Date: 8/14/2013 2:01:00 AM

I have already edited ....little bird is flying again:)