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Your Wings Flutter Around My Heart

Idyllic reveries of fragmentary memories painfully pierce my soul through; melting away without you. 5/25/2019 Night of Memories 4/5/2019 Poetry Contest: Arbitrium Divisa Sponsored by: Gregory R Barden

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Date: 6/13/2019 6:12:00 PM
back again third time , this time with Congrats in Greg's contest!
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Date: 6/13/2019 2:00:00 PM
'Melting away with you' -- Sigh. Just utter, elegant loveliness, Eve...And congrats on your placement in Greg's contest. You've met some might high standards there! :) gw
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Date: 6/13/2019 10:07:00 AM
Lovely, Eve. Congrats on your most deserving win.
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Date: 5/28/2019 8:19:00 PM
Your poem is so deeply moving, Eve. Your poignant title and imagery is so beautifully soulful. Congratulations on your excellent win. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Date: 5/28/2019 5:45:00 PM
Back with well deserved congrats, Eve.
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Date: 5/28/2019 5:35:00 PM
OH good, I see it scored in Brian's contest. WAY to GO, EVE!!! (I expect to be back here when Greg's contest is judged!)
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Date: 5/28/2019 2:05:00 PM
truly heartfelt, eve... you move me!...huggs
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Date: 5/28/2019 1:36:00 PM
A succinct write - beautiful and surly a win. Hugs, Jennifer
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Date: 5/27/2019 1:51:00 PM
LOVE THIS!!!! I hope it scores high.
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Date: 5/27/2019 11:14:00 AM
A beautiful metaphoric flow, Eve; good luck!
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Date: 5/27/2019 10:06:00 AM
This is lovely..
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Date: 5/27/2019 3:40:00 AM
Very nice, Eve! Hugs...Kim
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Date: 5/26/2019 10:14:00 PM
Divine lines, Eve! Those 4 lines stand alone just fine, and then some. All the best ... CayCay
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Date: 5/26/2019 10:42:00 AM
Touchingly beautiful, Eve ...
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Date: 5/26/2019 7:40:00 AM
Very touching, Eve.
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Date: 5/26/2019 2:26:00 AM
I like this one, Eve Best wishes to you for a WIN Panagiota Xxx
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