Your Wings Flutter Around My Heart

Idyllic reveries
of fragmentary memories
painfully pierce my soul through;
melting away without you.


5/25/2019


Night of Memories 4/5/2019
 

 Poetry Contest: Arbitrium Divisa
Sponsored by: Gregory R Barden
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Dietrich Avatar
June 13, 2019 at 6:12 PM
back again third time , this time with Congrats in Greg's contest!
Wolf Avatar
June 13, 2019 at 2:00 PM
'Melting away with you' -- Sigh. Just utter, elegant loveliness, Eve...And congrats on your placement in Greg's contest. You've met some might high standards there! :) gw
Gauthier Avatar
June 13, 2019 at 10:07 AM
Lovely, Eve. Congrats on your most deserving win.
Ashley Avatar
May 28, 2019 at 8:19 PM
Your poem is so deeply moving, Eve. Your poignant title and imagery is so beautifully soulful. Congratulations on your excellent win. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Gauthier Avatar
May 28, 2019 at 5:45 PM
Back with well deserved congrats, Eve.
Dietrich Avatar
May 28, 2019 at 5:35 PM
OH good, I see it scored in Brian's contest. WAY to GO, EVE!!! (I expect to be back here when Greg's contest is judged!)
Onclaud Avatar
May 28, 2019 at 2:05 PM
truly heartfelt, eve... you move me!...huggs
Proxenos Avatar
May 28, 2019 at 1:36 PM
A succinct write - beautiful and surly a win. Hugs, Jennifer
Dietrich Avatar
May 27, 2019 at 1:51 PM
LOVE THIS!!!! I hope it scores high.
Sergi Avatar
May 27, 2019 at 11:14 AM
A beautiful metaphoric flow, Eve; good luck!
One Avatar
May 27, 2019 at 10:06 AM
This is lovely..
Rodrigues Avatar
May 27, 2019 at 3:40 AM
Very nice, Eve! Hugs...Kim
Godwin Avatar
May 26, 2019 at 10:14 PM
Divine lines, Eve! Those 4 lines stand alone just fine, and then some. All the best ... CayCay
Gupta Avatar
May 26, 2019 at 10:42 AM
Touchingly beautiful, Eve ...
Gauthier Avatar
May 26, 2019 at 7:40 AM
Very touching, Eve.
Romios Avatar
May 26, 2019 at 2:26 AM
I like this one, Eve Best wishes to you for a WIN Panagiota Xxx
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