Your Whisper

Is it the tremble of your whispers?
That keeps cutting off my breath
And led me in believing
That im the one you love to death
Is it the tremble of your whispers?
Or the softness of your touch
That reminds me of a feeling
That I always miss so much
Is it the tremble of your whispers?
Or the way you hold my hand
Met with such anticipation
Temptation God could not withstand
But it’s the tremble of your whispers
That still warms me deep inside
And takes me to the only place
A man in love can truly hide
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Rhoda-Goode Avatar
January 29, 2010 at 5:10 PM
I really enjoyed this one. Made me smile and drew me into it. Good write :)
Kendrick Avatar
January 29, 2010 at 4:45 PM
Interesting love write that you have penned here tonight. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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