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Your Victim

Ignore me all you can leave me for hours to wait. Break me slowley darlin. So many lies how do you keep your stories straight. And love they say is blind. Eternal is the passion. It only takes a second to remind. That morning you awoke beside me I question from false promises had you already picked him. The one for which i became your victim. Do actions speak louder than your passion filled screams. twisted are the thoughts of this jillted lovers dreams. Yet i found comfort in this pain. I dream o fhapiness togather. Slowley the mind does go insane. And in pain as when we first met. I wonder do you think apon thoose moments for which I cheerish. With spiteful regret. But like a dog beaten the love will never die. In nights spent in a drunken stuper I so valiaintly try. Wishing only for your return. Tears caress the pillow. When will my foolish heart ever learn. Happy was this old dog till you carelessly kicked him. Yet still I thirst for just a taste . Ever willing to be your victim Laugh If you will at this foolish heart. As i love without regret. Forever yours till from this life i so greatfully do depart.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/22/2009 5:25:00 PM
this is a great poem...im so glad ive read it!
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Date: 9/29/2009 9:29:00 AM
beautiful john. to be someones victium....sometimes it is our most cherished dream. xoxo Rain
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Date: 9/28/2009 10:14:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your heartfelt poetry . Love, Carol
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Date: 9/28/2009 5:43:00 AM
it's amazing john , so touching :) i'm on chat if u r around , Noura ,
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Date: 9/27/2009 7:43:00 AM
heartfelt John and sad,departing-losing someone we love is always a heartache,but i always believed in destiny and a better sunshine after each rain,excellent write John my friend--Charma
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