Your True Gardener

My lotus flower, adrift on the water bed,
Your petals top the pond,
Lilies, Irises, Hyacinths.
The sun reminisces,
And the moon grieves,
For in the dark of night,
It hides your leaves.

I weed your sodden garden,
Cattail, Waterthymes, Reeds.
My lotus you're safe,
I know your needs.

The scabs from the tear,
Haunts your fragile stem,
Faint, pink lines like those of your petals,
Shine like a gem.

My lotus I trace along those lines, 
And your hesitance remains,
My lotus, I say,
"I know not the hurricane,
That caused your injury,
Nor the pain of how it felt,
But I know the misery,
And the doubt."

My lotus, I hold your leaves,
"Your weeds grow back,
But I will still stay,
Your stem dries,
And I will water you everyday,"

My lotus, I caress your greenery,
"Your flowers have bloomed,
In the harshest of weather,
But now you know sunlight,
And I'll make sure it's forever."
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Mcconnell Avatar
November 13, 2023 at 3:55 AM
Nice penning Toby, with good rhyme and imagery too. Blessings,Gordon
Agustin Avatar
October 14, 2023 at 5:48 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your "Gardener" thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Adams Avatar
October 16, 2023 at 4:24 AM
Thank you ??
Frank Avatar
October 11, 2023 at 10:42 PM
A good metaphor for love. Well written.
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