Your Tides Surface Me With Your Love

love, you surface me
                    like pebbles on a fawn beach-
      rocky ground turns soft


MagiCicada 13 or 17 Poetry Contest
June 14, 2019
Maureen McGreavy
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Rodrigues Avatar
July 2, 2019 at 7:30 AM
Such a beautiful image, Luloo! Congratulations!
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 1, 2019 at 2:05 PM
Hello Lu-Lu, I have enjoyed this one. have a nice day my friend.
Canerdy Avatar
July 1, 2019 at 1:38 PM
CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win, Lu Loo! Lovely figures of speech! Janice
Andresen Avatar
June 14, 2019 at 12:43 PM
- A very sweet one, L.L. - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
June 14, 2019 at 11:00 AM
sweet romantic poem luLoo:-) hugs Jan xx
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