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Your Taken

I'm too late, I know your taken. I know I need to awaken. I need to get you out of my head. But without you, inside I honestly feel dead. On this earth you only get one true soul mate. I knew the day I met you, that it was fate. The first time I saw you walk into the room, time stopped, and took a while to resume. We became friends and got to know each other pretty well. From there on out, I was under your hypnotic spell. Sometimes I could be having the worst day, then you walk in and all my troubles go away. We would study together and talk and I would get lost in your eyes. The most beautiful green, it was like an angel came down from the skies. When we weren't together, I couldn't get you out of my mind. It is so rare, a gorgeous woman inside and out, combined. I need to realize that my heart is now buried, because your taken, and engaged to be married. You were the greatest thing in my life, you taught me how to be free. I like you so much, that I just want you to be happy, even if its not with me. APT

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/8/2011 2:03:00 PM
An emotive write Chris that I can relate too, I love the ending that even though it is not what you want you still wish her the happiness she deserves.. That is love in my book.. I really enjoyed this :)
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Date: 5/8/2011 5:31:00 AM
Very moving write on love and missed loved... your blog sorta mirrors my life a bit except for the masters and degree.. "A Walk Through Time" which I wrote a while back may apply to you too.. Love your take on it.. Stay well my friend...MJF
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Date: 5/8/2011 4:58:00 AM
Very touchy and moving expressions , Chris
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Date: 5/7/2011 10:09:00 PM
i need to find the verse..it says..the woman sanctifies the house..i am that woman...Gods plans does involve using other people to make sure he gets what he desires..
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Date: 5/7/2011 10:08:00 PM
sometimes we do not understand Gods will with soul mates..with my husband if i was not here he would not be a saved man..i am the one who binds the house as the bible says..Gods plans are so much bigger then what we can see sometimes..I think I got pregnant the first month we were together to ensure his salvation..and knowing my beliefs, he knew I would remain...
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