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Your Suicide

I wanted the knife to find me But it was you that fell to the floor Your blood surrounds me It cornered me into the door There you lay in front of me She stopped shaking to breathe her last breath I couldn't even blink Only stare into my new found Distorted despair

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Date: 8/22/2020 12:03:00 PM
this is so sad,you wanted to take the pain,instead i feel you could not save,heartfelt and well written,good luck Heather
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Heather Walters
Date: 8/22/2020 12:07:00 PM
Thank you very much I appreciate you

Book: Shattered Sighs