Your Suicide

I wanted the knife to find me

But it was you that fell to the floor

Your blood surrounds  me

It cornered me into the door

There you lay in front of me

She stopped shaking to breathe her last breath

I couldn't even blink

Only stare into my new found

Distorted despair
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Bounds Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 12:03 PM
this is so sad,you wanted to take the pain,instead i feel you could not save,heartfelt and well written,good luck Heather
Walters Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 12:07 PM
Thank you very much I appreciate you
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