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YOUR SUFFERING* Oh, my friend, Russell, How much I wish your suffering Water to be For At once it to the last drop to drink Thus Your anguish instantly to end And The smile on your lips, yet again to Bring! © Demetrios Trifiatis 06 DECEMBER 2013 Dedicated to my friend RUSSELL! He commented on my poem, YOUTH AND OLD AGE, writing the following: "I'm having problems with my teeth, big time pain, I can't seem to get anyone to really help me...I always have to wait until they have an opening for me to get in even if it is an Emergency! So I must wait until Monday, and I am in a lot of pain these days, there are at least 2 teeth that need removal...I'm afraid of having pain all through the weekend! So now think of me these few days! I'll try to get on soon!"

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Date: 12/6/2013 9:08:00 PM
Thank you Demetrios for your kindness and heartfelt friendship! This poem means a lot to me and it helps me with my pain just by your friendship within each part of this poem! I loved how warm and generous your piece is to my heart! Such a tremendous poem, Great Work!!
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 12/7/2013 1:59:00 AM
Happy you feel better, Russell, all friends have helped! God bless you!
Date: 12/6/2013 10:29:00 AM
Way to be a good friend and commentate on his pain. Anne
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 12/6/2013 11:27:00 AM
Thank you ,Anne, you too are a good friend for have visited and commented!
Date: 12/6/2013 4:43:00 AM
- Tooth pain .... yes poor Russell ..... strong tooth pain gives headache and stiff neck .... can not drink or eat ..... Thanks for the thoughtful poem to our good friend Russell, Demetrios. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 12/6/2013 11:32:00 AM
Our friend, Anne Lise, is in suffering and we , at least, be with him in spirit for to lessen his pain! Thank you!
Date: 12/6/2013 1:28:00 AM
hahaha nice dedication on friendship, Demetrios
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 12/6/2013 11:33:00 AM
Dr. Ram, thank you for caring. The situation for Russell is not that pleasant!

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