Your Suffering

YOUR SUFFERING*



Oh, my friend, Russell,
How much I wish your suffering
Water to be
For  
At once it to the last drop to drink
Thus 
Your anguish instantly to end 
And 
The smile on your lips, yet again to
Bring! 



© Demetrios Trifiatis
06 DECEMBER 2013


Dedicated to my friend RUSSELL!
He commented on my poem, YOUTH AND OLD AGE,
writing the following:

"I'm having problems with my teeth, big time pain, 
I can't seem to get anyone to really help me...I always 
have to wait until they have an opening for me to get in
even if it is an Emergency! So I must wait until Monday,
and I am in a lot of pain these days, there are at least 2 
teeth that need removal...I'm afraid of having pain all through
the weekend! So now think of me these few days! 
I'll try to get on soon!"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Sivey Avatar
December 6, 2013 at 9:08 PM
Thank you Demetrios for your kindness and heartfelt friendship! This poem means a lot to me and it helps me with my pain just by your friendship within each part of this poem! I loved how warm and generous your piece is to my heart! Such a tremendous poem, Great Work!!
Trifiatis Avatar
December 7, 2013 at 1:59 AM
Happy you feel better, Russell, all friends have helped! God bless you!
Rutherford Avatar
December 6, 2013 at 10:29 AM
Way to be a good friend and commentate on his pain. Anne
Trifiatis Avatar
December 6, 2013 at 11:27 AM
Thank you ,Anne, you too are a good friend for have visited and commented!
Andresen Avatar
December 6, 2013 at 4:43 AM
- Tooth pain .... yes poor Russell ..... strong tooth pain gives headache and stiff neck .... can not drink or eat ..... Thanks for the thoughtful poem to our good friend Russell, Demetrios. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
December 6, 2013 at 11:32 AM
Our friend, Anne Lise, is in suffering and we , at least, be with him in spirit for to lessen his pain! Thank you!
Mehta Avatar
December 6, 2013 at 1:28 AM
hahaha nice dedication on friendship, Demetrios
Trifiatis Avatar
December 6, 2013 at 11:33 AM
Dr. Ram, thank you for caring. The situation for Russell is not that pleasant!
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