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Your Struggle Is My Release

You soothingly say you must still strive to make love thrive. Stop laboring! I'll drive away now. Life's too short . . .
January 13, 2021 entered in the 20-Word Max Do It with Feeling Poetry Contest Placed 1st Sponsor: Line Gauthier January 18, 2021 entered in Brian Strand's Completely Your Choice (45) Contest

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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/18/2021 9:52:00 AM
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very well done and a fanatastic placement. Congrats, Janice.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/18/2021 9:52:00 PM
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Thanks a million, Andrea. Janice
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Carol Mitra
Date: 1/17/2021 12:39:00 AM
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Wow....that last line....shows what was meant to be....Congrats on your win Janice :)
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/18/2021 6:36:00 AM
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Thanks so much, Carol. Janice
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/16/2021 8:25:00 PM
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Wow! Way to go in Line's contest, Janice. Right up there at the top. Congrats, gw
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/18/2021 6:37:00 AM
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Thanks so much, Gershon! Janice
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Jan Allison
Date: 1/16/2021 12:45:00 PM
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Wise words indeed well penned Janice, congrats on your win :-) hugs Jan xx
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/16/2021 7:49:00 PM
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Thanks so much, Jan. Janice
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 1/15/2021 9:47:00 AM
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An exceptional poignant poem with deep meaning and cleverly and creatively penned. Well done Janice. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/16/2021 11:21:00 AM
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Thanks a million, Jennifer. Janice
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Regina Mcintosh
Date: 1/14/2021 3:54:00 AM
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lovely verse.. and vision. God bless you and best for the contest
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/16/2021 6:51:00 AM
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Thanks so much, Regina. Janice
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/13/2021 3:42:00 PM
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Point made -- to the max! G.L. in the contest! :) gw
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/16/2021 6:50:00 AM
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Thanks so much, Gershon. Janice
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/13/2021 3:41:00 PM
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Emotions come through every line, Janice--the last two lines speak eloquently to convey your message. All the best.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/16/2021 6:50:00 AM
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Thanks so much, Vijay. Janice

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