Janice Canerdy Poet Verse

Your Struggle Is My Release

You soothingly say
you must still strive
to make love thrive.
Stop laboring! I'll drive
away now. Life's too short . . .


January 13, 2021
entered in the 20-Word Max Do It with Feeling Poetry Contest   Placed 1st
Sponsor: Line Gauthier

January 18, 2021
entered in Brian Strand's Completely Your Choice (45) Contest

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Andrea Dietrich January 18, 2021 at 9:52 AM very well done and a fanatastic placement. Congrats, Janice. Janice Canerdy January 18, 2021 at 9:52 PM Thanks a million, Andrea. Janice

Carol Mitra January 17, 2021 at 12:39 AM Wow....that last line....shows what was meant to be....Congrats on your win Janice :) Janice Canerdy January 18, 2021 at 6:36 AM Thanks so much, Carol. Janice

Gershon Wolf January 16, 2021 at 8:25 PM Wow! Way to go in Line's contest, Janice. Right up there at the top. Congrats, gw Janice Canerdy January 18, 2021 at 6:37 AM Thanks so much, Gershon! Janice

Jan Allison January 16, 2021 at 12:45 PM Wise words indeed well penned Janice, congrats on your win :-) hugs Jan xx Janice Canerdy January 16, 2021 at 7:49 PM Thanks so much, Jan. Janice

Jennifer Proxenos January 15, 2021 at 9:47 AM An exceptional poignant poem with deep meaning and cleverly and creatively penned. Well done Janice. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer Janice Canerdy January 16, 2021 at 11:21 AM Thanks a million, Jennifer. Janice

Regina Mcintosh January 14, 2021 at 3:54 AM lovely verse.. and vision. God bless you and best for the contest Janice Canerdy January 16, 2021 at 6:51 AM Thanks so much, Regina. Janice

Gershon Wolf January 13, 2021 at 3:42 PM Point made -- to the max! G.L. in the contest! :) gw Janice Canerdy January 16, 2021 at 6:50 AM Thanks so much, Gershon. Janice

Vijay Pandit January 13, 2021 at 3:41 PM Emotions come through every line, Janice--the last two lines speak eloquently to convey your message. All the best. Janice Canerdy January 16, 2021 at 6:50 AM Thanks so much, Vijay. Janice