Michael J. Falotico Poet Haiku

Your Sky Painted

the sky my canvas..
                                        rainbows of colors in hand..
                                               create from pallet..

                                              painting stars for you..
                                         red, yellow and orange flow..
                                       strokes brushed firm and light..

                                         our world now framed bright..
                                              my gift to you, poetry..
                                               words colored in love..

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Gautami Phookan June 10, 2011 at 2:10 PM Love these haikus,the sky as canvas is so very beautiful..Congrats Michael on your fantastic win in this contest..gautami

Joe Maverick June 9, 2011 at 10:53 PM Congratulations Michael on the win in P Ds contest (enjoyed the tight read here)

Jack Horne June 9, 2011 at 10:35 AM Many congratulations on your win, Michael : )

Carol Sunshine Brown June 9, 2011 at 7:18 AM Congratulations on a well deserved win in Poet Destroyer's "Haiku~Crazy" contest Michael. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta June 9, 2011 at 7:16 AM y congratultions on the third place win in the contest of p.d., Michael

Nette Onclaud June 9, 2011 at 1:40 AM so, so grand michael.. well deserving of the award! grrreat stuff... : ) huggs

Kabuteng P.Ink K. June 8, 2011 at 10:58 PM coming back here to congratulate you this time Michael :D enjoyed your painted sky here :D hugs

Poet Destroyer A June 8, 2011 at 9:21 PM Michael~ congratulations!!! A great painted pictures of haiku! the color can also be so crazy like love... enjoyed have nice one,..p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 8, 2011 at 8:34 PM congrats to my White Knight for a super win in Haiku contest with wonderful words to thrill the soul and satisfy the mind luv.. Jersey Girl in hot temp mode.. it hit 100 today ...102 next two days luv...stay safe..

Andrea Dietrich June 8, 2011 at 8:19 PM Congratulations, Michael. I just now saw you won big with this one! WEll deserved!

Andrea Dietrich June 5, 2011 at 9:19 PM this is great, MIchael. HOw will PD ever choose among all the wonderful entries I've been seeing for this contest? Yours is so colorful.

Kabuteng P.Ink K. June 5, 2011 at 2:09 PM beautiful write you have here, Michael! and how very fitting to read about rainbows :) Wilma just sent me beautiful pics of rainbows that she saw :) go check out my poem about a gray day turned upside down :) hugs & happy to read this :)

Caryl Muzzey June 5, 2011 at 11:06 AM Michael, a wonderful triplet of Haikus you have penned on a beautiful subject. Best to you~ Caryl

Carolyn Devonshire June 5, 2011 at 9:52 AM So beautifully written, Michael. Your poem made me think of Van Gogh's painting "Starry Night." Always sending winning wishes to you and I love your colorful haiku series! Thanks for your comment. Did you see the blog photos? I'm sharing fish with five families and still have a freezer full. It's great to read your work again. Have a wonderful Sunday! Love, Carolyn

Kash Poet June 5, 2011 at 9:16 AM Amazing poetry here Michael...enjoyed.Best wishes.

Wilma Neels June 5, 2011 at 9:10 AM okay, my third try.. I think my network is being jealous lol... Loads of smiles while reading this gem of yours Michael. Wishing you all the best for the contest, btw I just send off pics of rainbows to a friend of mine, your words would complement them beautifully :) love wilma

Dinda Minardi June 5, 2011 at 9:05 AM poetry...words colored in love... wonderful :)

Kacey Greenlee June 5, 2011 at 8:55 AM I love this.Your stream of color is deff. a inviting image.You will do great in this contest.I would rank u high for sure.Thanks for enjoying my poems as well.Have a great day love.Kacey

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 5, 2011 at 8:25 AM sweetest delight and eye candy treat to read and inhale the loveliness of these gorgeous lines Michael.. stirring passion and sweet romance rolled into these Haikus for P.D. good luck my friend ..your words touch the deepest core of the heart for your Jersey Girl in sweet mode..luv..