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Your Satin Silk Touch

My darling love—you are the true angel of my existence! Your satin silk touch mirrors your beauty in the moonlight! Your satin silk touch always sets my true emotions afire, With your scent of perfume and luscious red lips blushing. Your warm tears are precious dewdrops kissing softly true, As heavenly honey crystals shine bright signifying our love. I look deeply into your eyes and realize our life is so special, And that the magic of your divine beauty is beyond reproach. Touching becomes my every precious breath now gasping hard, For fresh air as I lay my eyes on you and feel your angelic aura. As the very salt is awash in my ocean of dreams my dearest one, My heart and soul are always one with you—as my true love rare. What we share in this wondrous life are Heaven and Earth as one! Your satin silk touch is the enchanted alchemy of our forever love! Gary Bateman and Liam McDaid, A Collaborated Poem Copyright © All Rights Reserved – June 1, 2016 (Unrhymed Couplet

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Date: 6/11/2016 8:22:00 AM
One day we should do a collaboration.
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Date: 6/11/2016 8:21:00 AM
What a tremendous choice for POTD. Congrats!
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Date: 6/5/2016 8:02:00 AM
Enchantingly sweet love
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Date: 6/5/2016 7:01:00 AM
Liam Mate, Thanks for letting me know that our co-write received the POTD honor. (I have been away for a short while.) I'm personally very pleased that our fellow Soup colleagues have received this particular write so well. It is "enchanted alchemy" through and through!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Date: 6/4/2016 11:34:00 PM
Brilliant. Congrats on having the POTD recognition.
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Date: 6/4/2016 1:23:00 PM
Liam, Big congrats for POTD. Enjoyed every line.........//:)hugs
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Date: 6/4/2016 12:26:00 PM
- Beautiful poem Liam and Gary !!! - Congratulations :) - (I've burned my fingers, short comments ) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/4/2016 10:26:00 AM
Hi Liam!:))Wow!Congratulations to you and Gary on POTD!Just dazzling!You very much deserve it for sure.Very beautifully painted romantic love piece, my dearest friends Liam n' Gary.Just awesome!Outstanding collaboration!Very heartfelt beautiful and sweet.I'm so extremely happy for you both:))Enjoy your day!Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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Date: 6/4/2016 10:11:00 AM
Beautiful and sensual poem, deserving of the honor of potd
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Date: 6/4/2016 9:57:00 AM
such beautiful words,now you make me envious Liam.
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Date: 6/4/2016 7:28:00 AM
Congratulations Gary and Liam on your collaborative effort and POTD honors...
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Date: 6/4/2016 5:44:00 AM
many congrats on POTD Gary and Liam another stunning romantic write:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/3/2016 9:41:00 AM
Well done, Liam & Gary! You never disappoint! You both have the touch ... a poetical one! Full marks to you. ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 6/3/2016 9:12:00 AM
Liam Mate, Thanks for the first posting here of our collaborated work!! (I'll probably post it on my end sometime next week.) I really liked the "touch" and "deep emotion" of this particular couplet. Enjoyed are combined thoughts on this one!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Date: 6/2/2016 7:34:00 PM
You guys have set the soup on fire !!!I like the way both of you work and collaborate with each other... A7 and a fav from rediery... Satin sill touch mirrors your beauty.... So divine and romantic...!!! Standing ovation !!!
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Date: 6/2/2016 12:29:00 PM
Hi Liam n' Gary!:))Wow!!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friends.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!Just amazing!So wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Excellent imagery!Outstanding collaboration!Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + to each!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray that you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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