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Your Poem Total
You are coming right along with your poem total
Yet your poem only had evidence that was anecdotal,
And after along for a while it had been wildly totted,
Ended up and turned out to brightly be daily devoted.
There truly was evidence of much discomfort
Which is why it always started to painfully hurt
And an extraordinary moment that was taciturn
It was then I had a horrible case of heartburn.
Right?
Jim Horn
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