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Today, as random thoughts were passing through
One came along which took my mind to you
These days, they come around now and again
I guess because you have become my friend

My thought, per chance you showed up at my place
How you'd react when my dog licked your face
It made me laugh when I thought of your smile
A pleasant thought that lasted quite a while

I wrote this poem for you, so I could share
That happiness, to let you know I care
Tomorrow, if your thought passes my way
I know for sure that it will make my day


    
by Daniel Turner
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Proxenos Avatar
March 2, 2019 at 6:40 AM
Sounds like a special poem for a special person! A very sentimental write! Beautifully penned, Jennifer.
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 17, 2018 at 12:59 PM
Hello Daniel, this is a lovely poem to a friend. Have a nice day my friend.
Roper Avatar
September 14, 2018 at 11:38 AM
I love this sentimental verse, Daniel , so well written.. I also thank you for your comment on Arthur's blog and poem.. Friends are alway close in time like these. Hugs dear friend
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 12, 2018 at 12:28 PM
Hello Daniel, this quite a poem. It melted my heart when i read it. Have a nice day my friend.
Wade Avatar
September 8, 2018 at 6:57 PM
Great poem. Loved the sentiment, especially the dog licking face. Love dogs. I have been out of action for about 3 months. Broke hip and leg. Still slow on a walker. Just got back into poetry. Blessings, Vivien
Daniel Avatar
August 30, 2018 at 2:41 AM
Congratulations on your win with this beauty, DT:) Hope you are well...
Duet Avatar
August 22, 2018 at 11:43 PM
What a lovely, happy poem, Danny, and a new FAV for me. So easy to imagine you with a smile on your face.Congratulations on your win too.
Gentry Avatar
August 22, 2018 at 10:13 AM
Back to congratulate you for your 2nd place win. Where you been? Guess I'll get a road trip going and we'll see if you have a dog :)
Pappadogiannis Avatar
August 22, 2018 at 12:15 AM
Congratulations on your win Daniel. Lovely words of happiness!
Roper Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 11:55 PM
Back with congratulations on your win!!!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 8:23 AM
The third time's a charm... CONGRATULATIONS!!! :)) xomo! <3
Moorman Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 2:35 AM
WOW! Daniel, what a wonderful poem. It says what I wish I could say when I let my thoughts soar. Great write from a great poet. Congratulations on a fine win, my friend!
Barden Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 2:16 AM
This just plain charmed me, Daniel, and left a smile on my face ... I know not who it's written for, but I think perhaps for ALL of us who find your friendship and kindness so valuable! May that be returned a hundred-fold, my friend! Congratulations on your SECOND PLACE in the 'My Muse, Mortal' Poetry Contest! :-)
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 1:58 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful second placement Daniel. I knew this was going to be a top winner! : )
Gentry Avatar
August 18, 2018 at 4:41 PM
Stopped by for something new from you... :)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 6:29 AM
Back for another dose of sweetness ;) xomo!
Salehi Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 3:22 AM
I know you do care... Beautifully done...
Murray Avatar
August 15, 2018 at 1:49 PM
So many of us here would love to stop by Daniel. I don't fancy a face lick but I'm I'm always up for a cuppa.
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 4:36 PM
A great entry for the contest Daniel. Loved ones who visit are a blessing and certainly do make our day! Poetry can accomplish that too! : )
Roper Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 7:08 PM
Fantastic imagery and nicely written verse, Daniel. My dog is always trying to get my attention beside licking my face ! Hugs Eve
Nance Avatar
August 4, 2018 at 6:44 AM
aww this is nice I like it :)
Lawless Avatar
August 1, 2018 at 3:37 PM
Great work with this theme Daniel,
Smith Avatar
August 1, 2018 at 10:32 AM
You old sweetie you, lovely sentiment Daniel...
Haight Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 6:08 PM
Such a lovely poem, Daniel, so full of kindness, remembering and longing. I enjoyed reading this, and I wish you all the best for the contest. Sandra
Gentry Avatar
July 29, 2018 at 6:14 PM
Oh wow. This is so sweet and tender and beautiful!! So YOU! I love it. Makes me smile and is now a fave.
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