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Today, as random thoughts were passing through
One came along which took my mind to you
These days, they come around now and again
I guess because you have become my friend

My thought, per chance you showed up at my place
How you'd react when my dog licked your face
It made me laugh when I thought of your smile
A pleasant thought that lasted quite a while

I wrote this poem for you, so I could share
That happiness, to let you know I care
Tomorrow, if your thought passes my way
I know for sure that it will make my day


    
by Daniel Turner

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 7/16/2023 4:00:00 PM
Went back a bit. This has a nice feel, sort of familiar. Simple and sincere. Be well, Daniel.
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Date: 3/2/2019 6:40:00 AM
Sounds like a special poem for a special person! A very sentimental write! Beautifully penned, Jennifer.
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Date: 10/17/2018 12:59:00 PM
Hello Daniel, this is a lovely poem to a friend. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 9/14/2018 11:38:00 AM
I love this sentimental verse, Daniel , so well written.. I also thank you for your comment on Arthur's blog and poem.. Friends are alway close in time like these. Hugs dear friend
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Date: 9/12/2018 12:28:00 PM
Hello Daniel, this quite a poem. It melted my heart when i read it. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 9/8/2018 6:57:00 PM
Great poem. Loved the sentiment, especially the dog licking face. Love dogs. I have been out of action for about 3 months. Broke hip and leg. Still slow on a walker. Just got back into poetry. Blessings, Vivien
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Date: 8/30/2018 2:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this beauty, DT:) Hope you are well...
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Date: 8/22/2018 11:43:00 PM
What a lovely, happy poem, Danny, and a new FAV for me. So easy to imagine you with a smile on your face.Congratulations on your win too.
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Date: 8/22/2018 10:13:00 AM
Back to congratulate you for your 2nd place win. Where you been? Guess I'll get a road trip going and we'll see if you have a dog :)
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Date: 8/22/2018 12:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Daniel. Lovely words of happiness!
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Date: 8/21/2018 11:55:00 PM
Back with congratulations on your win!!!
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Date: 8/21/2018 8:23:00 AM
The third time's a charm... CONGRATULATIONS!!! :)) xomo! <3
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Date: 8/21/2018 2:35:00 AM
WOW! Daniel, what a wonderful poem. It says what I wish I could say when I let my thoughts soar. Great write from a great poet. Congratulations on a fine win, my friend!
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Date: 8/21/2018 2:16:00 AM
This just plain charmed me, Daniel, and left a smile on my face ... I know not who it's written for, but I think perhaps for ALL of us who find your friendship and kindness so valuable! May that be returned a hundred-fold, my friend! Congratulations on your SECOND PLACE in the 'My Muse, Mortal' Poetry Contest! :-)
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Date: 8/21/2018 1:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful second placement Daniel. I knew this was going to be a top winner! : )
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Date: 8/18/2018 4:41:00 PM
Stopped by for something new from you... :)
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Date: 8/17/2018 6:29:00 AM
Back for another dose of sweetness ;) xomo!
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Date: 8/17/2018 3:22:00 AM
I know you do care... Beautifully done...
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Date: 8/15/2018 1:49:00 PM
So many of us here would love to stop by Daniel. I don't fancy a face lick but I'm I'm always up for a cuppa.
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Date: 8/14/2018 4:36:00 PM
A great entry for the contest Daniel. Loved ones who visit are a blessing and certainly do make our day! Poetry can accomplish that too! : )
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Date: 8/12/2018 7:08:00 PM
Fantastic imagery and nicely written verse, Daniel. My dog is always trying to get my attention beside licking my face ! Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/4/2018 6:44:00 AM
aww this is nice I like it :)
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Date: 8/1/2018 3:37:00 PM
Great work with this theme Daniel,
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Date: 8/1/2018 10:32:00 AM
You old sweetie you, lovely sentiment Daniel...
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Date: 7/31/2018 6:08:00 PM
Such a lovely poem, Daniel, so full of kindness, remembering and longing. I enjoyed reading this, and I wish you all the best for the contest. Sandra
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