Your Places

you belong
you were born
mabe life was torn
don't let that stop you
you can get thur
just do
it too
don't let life go
let streng show
and not go to waste
fine
YOUR PLACES
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Pritts Avatar
June 25, 2011 at 6:02 AM
I understand the thought behind this one. And it was good. But the spelling was so atrocious that it was a pain to read. Please do a favor to all of us who love the written word and double check your spelling before you submit your poem.
Rutherford Avatar
June 24, 2011 at 4:04 PM
Hello Kurtis , you are very poetic , but you must do the spell checker on every poem . Looking forward to reading more of your work . Anne
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