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Your Place in My Thoughts

Your Place in My Thoughts I so forcibly suppress my thoughts of you. Your entity lingers like the putrid scent of sulfur in my soul. The havoc created leaving me shattered and blue. I had given up so many things for us. You seemed so happy, without a fuss. Yet you still threw me down so worthlessly like coal. Here I lay as destructive as ever. I knew our relations would be detrimental. For I never thought it would be us that'd sever. In the moments after we would both lash out. This deep hatred for another soon began to sprout This reality just begging to settle, I never knew it'd be so ungentle. May 5th, 2018

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Date: 6/25/2018 5:04:00 PM
I love your words they have intensity they talk back to you very expressive to read thanks like you never know what you got to its gone we always hear that it's hard to adjust in any situation
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Date: 5/5/2018 1:09:00 PM
Hi joseph, it s a really beautiful written poem and an enjoyable one to read, what can be worse apart from loving someone and knowing thst such person can never be yours, it kills you every second, but that s what life is, no matter what happens it will never stop for someone, you ll still move on, and life will still go on. Welcome to poetrysoup, I m sure that you ll enjoy your stay here, good luck and continue to write
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