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your place in a glass vase

the leaves are flotsam b’low water level - roses aspire

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Karen Croft

Date: 12/31/2023 5:19:00 PM

Very nice senryu

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/31/2023 8:46:00 PM

Thank you, Karen!

Paige Hind

Date: 12/27/2023 7:56:00 PM

Very beautiful.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/28/2023 6:34:00 AM

Thank you kindly, my friend!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/25/2023 9:15:00 PM

Yes, sometimes I think I am in that vase with the water about to be too low. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/26/2023 6:50:00 AM

I appreciate you visiting my page! Thank you, Sara!

Yann Rolland

Date: 12/22/2023 6:10:00 PM

subtle and beautiful, merry christmas poet Kim

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/23/2023 2:38:00 PM

Merry Christmas, Yann!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 12/22/2023 4:57:00 PM

appreciate the subtle depth within your words. Lovely imagery too...have a great evening, Sara

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/23/2023 2:38:00 PM

Thank you, Sara! Hope your having a nice holiday!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 12/22/2023 11:59:00 AM

Kim, this simple senryu has such a depth of meaning to be savored over and over. Your words remind me that life operates on so many levels and is influenced by what is both seen and unseen under the surface. Really nice writing and images! Merry Christmas to you and your family! Blessings of joy! One candle to go!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/22/2023 2:58:00 PM

Merry Christmas! Blessings and thank you!

Silent One

Date: 12/22/2023 10:52:00 AM

I did not know what flotsam meant, so I learned a new word today.. A nice senryu..

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/22/2023 3:00:00 PM

Thank you, Silent! I appreciate you, my friend!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/22/2023 2:59:00 PM

Thank you, Silent! I appreciate you, my friend!