your place in a glass vase

the leaves are flotsam
b’low water level -
roses aspire
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Croft Avatar
December 31, 2023 at 5:19 PM
Very nice senryu
Rodrigues Avatar
December 31, 2023 at 8:46 PM
Thank you, Karen!
Hind Avatar
December 27, 2023 at 7:56 PM
Very beautiful.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 28, 2023 at 6:34 AM
Thank you kindly, my friend!
Kendrick Avatar
December 25, 2023 at 9:15 PM
Yes, sometimes I think I am in that vase with the water about to be too low. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K
Rodrigues Avatar
December 26, 2023 at 6:50 AM
I appreciate you visiting my page! Thank you, Sara!
Rolland Avatar
December 22, 2023 at 6:10 PM
subtle and beautiful, merry christmas poet Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
December 23, 2023 at 2:38 PM
Merry Christmas, Yann!
Kauffman Avatar
December 22, 2023 at 11:59 AM
Kim, this simple senryu has such a depth of meaning to be savored over and over. Your words remind me that life operates on so many levels and is influenced by what is both seen and unseen under the surface. Really nice writing and images! Merry Christmas to you and your family! Blessings of joy! One candle to go!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 22, 2023 at 2:58 PM
Merry Christmas! Blessings and thank you!
One Avatar
December 22, 2023 at 10:52 AM
I did not know what flotsam meant, so I learned a new word today.. A nice senryu..
Rodrigues Avatar
December 22, 2023 at 3:00 PM
Thank you, Silent! I appreciate you, my friend!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 22, 2023 at 2:59 PM
Thank you, Silent! I appreciate you, my friend!
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