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Your picture so close Still not near and sometimes silent Engraved in my heart

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Date: 2/14/2010 11:22:00 AM
sad, so sad the loss is so raw in this poem. great senryu.
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Date: 2/14/2010 6:09:00 AM
So romantic! I agree about what you say concerning so-called Christians. It was fortold that a great apostasy would rule before Jesus would come again. according to 2 Thessolonians, chapter 2.
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Date: 2/14/2010 4:33:00 AM
Some sadness in this well written Senryu. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara
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Date: 2/11/2010 2:30:00 PM
Beautiful Senryu. Pictures can become embedded into the heart, can't they? Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 2/10/2010 11:02:00 PM
I love this poem,Yes that picture ,that memory is forever.beautiful..Charma
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