Your Picture

Your picture so close
Still not near and sometimes silent
Engraved in my heart
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Culverhouse Avatar
February 14, 2010 at 11:22 AM
sad, so sad the loss is so raw in this poem. great senryu.
Palli Avatar
February 14, 2010 at 6:09 AM
So romantic! I agree about what you say concerning so-called Christians. It was fortold that a great apostasy would rule before Jesus would come again. according to 2 Thessolonians, chapter 2.
Kendrick Avatar
February 14, 2010 at 4:33 AM
Some sadness in this well written Senryu. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara
Hilliker Avatar
February 11, 2010 at 2:30 PM
Beautiful Senryu. Pictures can become embedded into the heart, can't they? Thanks for sharing.
Chircop Avatar
February 10, 2010 at 11:02 PM
I love this poem,Yes that picture ,that memory is forever.beautiful..Charma
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