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Your Perfect Lines

How I always lose myself within your lines Each stanza, and rhyme are all so sublime Your way with words leaves me in awe Holding such perfection and not one flaw You’re forever bringing a smile to my lips As I ride upon your many peeks and dips I can taste each word that you recite Leaving me with such a pleasurable delight I breathe in each breath that you describe Experiencing each of the pieces that you scribe When I lost faith in love you made me feel When I lose hope they show me what’s real When if I allow each word to engulf me Pulling me in, while they l softly embrace me As I read between your perfectly written lines They hold me imprinting their design As if lovers I can truly feel your heat Striking a blaze within making me complete
December 8,2020

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Date: 12/26/2020 8:06:00 AM
Brenda, I think John got it right. Your beautiful poem 'Your Perfect Lines' left me without many words. Not mine anyway. But the ebb and flow of the lines took me back to a memory, an old classic Eagles song written by Jack Tempchin. "And I found out a long time ago What a woman can do to your soul ~~~Aw but she can't take you any way You don't already know how to go ~~~And I got a peaceful easy feelin' And I know you won't let me down 'Cause I'm already standin' On the ground" -Richard
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/3/2021 8:42:00 PM
Richard I’m so glad you enjoyed this piece! It was written with someone special in mind but alas my luck with fellas is so far from it being returned!:( but I can still write about it!:)
Date: 12/24/2020 12:17:00 PM
After reading through all of the accolades below...they have pretty much got it all covered -- beautiful love poem indeed, Poetess! In admiration. :) john P.s have a restful and peaceful Christmas.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/3/2021 8:41:00 PM
Ahhhjohn thank you so much my dear dear friend! ;)
Date: 12/13/2020 4:46:00 PM
This is really a beautiful love poem, Brenda. It's going straight into my FAVES. Thanks you for sharing it. ~ Romance and Radiance, Gershon
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/3/2021 8:40:00 PM
Gershon thank you my friend for stopping by I always did love your comments!;)
Date: 12/12/2020 6:26:00 AM
Love this - Each W O R D is a beautiful embrace to my soul. Joy within from reading this pen. God bless you always
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/13/2020 3:02:00 PM
Regina thank you so much!;)

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