Your Pain

It tears me apart
 for I have a soft heart.
To see you in pain,
 brings on the downfall of rain.
Respecting your personal life
 not questioning your strife.
Yet still I wonder
 what pain you're under.
I'd like to give you care
 but should I even dare?
You probably won't let me
 so I guess I'll let you be.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Allison Avatar
October 14, 2015 at 5:42 PM
It's difficult to step back when you know someone is in hurting but having read your comment I can see the angle you have written this from:-) hugs jan xx
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