Your Other Half

I was living in the dark
        With dancing demons around
               Hopes and butterflies
                     None I found
   Even the dark; extinguished the stars
                     I was astound
                        And then,
           so bright and magnificient
     The moon unveiled with no scars,
                    A beauty mark.
            Frightened the fear away
           And enlightened the stars,
             "Who are you" as I asked
              Replied; Your other half
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Agustin Avatar
December 7, 2024 at 9:59 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Ajmal Avatar
November 10, 2017 at 10:03 AM
A really beautiful written poem, what I obtained is that it s on a girl, well correct me if I m wrong. The imaginations, the description everything was perfect about it and thanks for reading my poem, I really appreciate it
Sain Avatar
November 10, 2017 at 10:23 AM
Thank you so much, yeah you're right and welcome :))
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