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Your Other Half

I was living in the dark With dancing demons around Hopes and butterflies None I found Even the dark; extinguished the stars I was astound And then, so bright and magnificient The moon unveiled with no scars, A beauty mark. Frightened the fear away And enlightened the stars, "Who are you" as I asked Replied; Your other half

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Beata Agustin

Date: 12/7/2024 9:59:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 11/10/2017 10:03:00 AM

A really beautiful written poem, what I obtained is that it s on a girl, well correct me if I m wrong. The imaginations, the description everything was perfect about it and thanks for reading my poem, I really appreciate it

Hus Sain
Date: 11/10/2017 10:23:00 AM

Thank you so much, yeah you're right and welcome :))