Kevin Clark Poet Rhyme

Your Once Luminous Love Is Now a Shadow On the Wall

Our life together was the brightest sunlight

A piercing ray that lit up the darkest night

This radiance that nothing could ever shade

A shining star we never thought would fade

Then all at once the illumination was burnt out

Filling my world with lurid pain and a dusky doubt

A blackish cloud hangs over my once brilliant eyes

Now my life is tormented with dull gloomy skies

Will there be a clearing is anyone’s lucid guess

For now my heart is drab and completely sunless

The memory of our fluorescent feelings I now often recall

Your once luminous love is now a shadow on the wall

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Andrea Dietrich February 13, 2012 at 8:21 AM THis is very nice writing with a great smooth flow, Kevin. I enjoyed seeing it here this morning. LUv, Andrea Kevin Clark February 13, 2012 at 4:55 PM Thanks so much Andrea for your comments.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders February 13, 2012 at 6:27 AM Kevin, this is so vivid. I can feel the heartache. I hope it is fiction and you are not suffering through a loss...thanks so much for reading and commenting on my writings yesterday. God bless you, Rhonda Kevin Clark February 13, 2012 at 4:56 PM Thanks Rhonda for your comments. The best compliment is when someone has any emtional or feeling towards my poetry

Anne-Lise Andresen February 13, 2012 at 5:55 AM Sorry for yours lost Kevin.Very good poem writting to day. - oxox love from Anne-Lise Kevin Clark February 13, 2012 at 5:00 PM Thanks for your comments Anne. I have not suffered any loss at this time. This is just how I write. Its all about the love and loss with me.