Hgarvey Daniel Esquire Poet Rhyme

Your Not a Poet- Hg

I'm not going to help YOU ; I'm not going to comment; Good or Bad
Yes: I viewed YOUR POEM; but if YOUR in the upper Echelon, how sad
What would that do to POETRY? ; What would it do to Poetry's History
A man with no Heart, Expressing no Feeling, Creates a POEM of Mystery
Of a LOVE unknown / unlived; A LOVE  I thought would never to be reborn
Does anyone believe  that todays POETRY is only a Word replacing Scorn
You think YOU speak of Love : of Life, of Reallity ; You do not know "LIFE "
For it is sad, can any of YOU tell me,YOU Have never lost Family or a WIFE
I want to understand POETRY : Before it Drives me " MAD "

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Rebecca Larkin February 3, 2012 at 6:47 PM Very nice, I thoroughly enjoyed the read and the contemplation it brings to the reader.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart December 21, 2010 at 4:23 PM Soup Mail..HG my silent beau..luv..

Debbie Guzzi December 21, 2010 at 1:50 PM You OK? dear friend?? Light & Love

Lynette Chachere December 20, 2010 at 5:55 PM a poet writing of something they are not even sure of themselves because they aren't sure where it comes from. the ending speaks loud, Harry. take care.(: ~Always&Forever

Dr.Ram Mehta December 20, 2010 at 11:25 AM Who says you are not a poet -you are a poet great understanding and competent enought to write such nice piece of introspective thoughts, HG

Audrey Haick December 20, 2010 at 10:25 AM A well-expressed and written Rhyme, HG. Always when the heart speaks, one can tell. Keep expressing exactly how you feel and sharing your poems with us. Blessings, peace and joy this holy season and always, Love, Audrey

Linda-Marie Sweetheart December 20, 2010 at 9:31 AM A brilliant piece HG my silent beau... a true insightful voyage into the inner recesses of mind and heart..spirit and soul my friend to express so much.. enjoyed with luv.. and u are a wonderful poet HG... your forever and always "Sweetheart >>>...