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Your Next Breath

your next breath, if it is your last breath, where will you spend eternity 30 May 2018 For the contest sponsored by Silent One

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Line Gauthier

Date: 6/15/2018 10:36:00 AM

Deep message. Congrats on your well deserved top win, Curtis.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/2/2018 8:09:00 PM

a deep thinking one, Curtis. Down here with you on the list wishing you congratulations.

Curtis Moorman
Date: 6/3/2018 1:06:00 AM

Andrea, how great to hear from you. Thank you for stopping by. You know you have been my greatest supporter and encourager since I have been a member of Soup. You have been such a good friend and so inspiring and I appreciate it. Hope all is well with you.

Susan Gentry

Date: 6/2/2018 1:33:00 AM

Good question... Congratulations on your placement!

Curtis Moorman
Date: 6/2/2018 1:56:00 AM

Yes, it is a good question and the answer is eternal. Thank you, Susan for your great support and encouragement. I appreciate it.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/1/2018 6:03:00 AM

- Congratulations with your one line, Curtis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Curtis Moorman
Date: 6/1/2018 7:22:00 AM

Thank you, Anne-Lise! How are things in your neck of the woods? All is well, I hope.

Silent One

Date: 6/1/2018 5:21:00 AM

We never know when it will be our last breath.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Curtis Moorman
Date: 6/1/2018 7:21:00 AM

So right, S O and thank you for selecting my entry for placement. It truly means a lot to me to place in a contest sponsored by you. Your fairness in judging and in complimentary remarks is always inspirational.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/30/2018 6:29:00 PM

Breathing out this questionku with apt fingers!

Curtis Moorman
Date: 5/30/2018 8:13:00 PM

I like that analogy, Kim. Monoku is a real challenge since it has to be so explicit. Thanks for your support and encouragement.

Arturo Michael

Date: 5/30/2018 1:50:00 PM

A good question...no one came back to report...All the best Curtis

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/30/2018 1:36:00 PM

Lovely monoku Curtis, a lot said in a few words. Good luck. Tom