Your Next Breath

your next breath, if it is your last breath, where will you spend eternity

30 May 2018
For the contest sponsored by Silent One
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 10:36 AM
Deep message. Congrats on your well deserved top win, Curtis.
Dietrich Avatar
June 2, 2018 at 8:09 PM
a deep thinking one, Curtis. Down here with you on the list wishing you congratulations.
Moorman Avatar
June 3, 2018 at 1:06 AM
Andrea, how great to hear from you. Thank you for stopping by. You know you have been my greatest supporter and encourager since I have been a member of Soup. You have been such a good friend and so inspiring and I appreciate it. Hope all is well with you.
Gentry Avatar
June 2, 2018 at 1:33 AM
Good question... Congratulations on your placement!
Moorman Avatar
June 2, 2018 at 1:56 AM
Yes, it is a good question and the answer is eternal. Thank you, Susan for your great support and encouragement. I appreciate it.
Andresen Avatar
June 1, 2018 at 6:03 AM
- Congratulations with your one line, Curtis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Moorman Avatar
June 1, 2018 at 7:22 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise! How are things in your neck of the woods? All is well, I hope.
One Avatar
June 1, 2018 at 5:21 AM
We never know when it will be our last breath.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Moorman Avatar
June 1, 2018 at 7:21 AM
So right, S O and thank you for selecting my entry for placement. It truly means a lot to me to place in a contest sponsored by you. Your fairness in judging and in complimentary remarks is always inspirational.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 30, 2018 at 6:29 PM
Breathing out this questionku with apt fingers!
Moorman Avatar
May 30, 2018 at 8:13 PM
I like that analogy, Kim. Monoku is a real challenge since it has to be so explicit. Thanks for your support and encouragement.
Michael Avatar
May 30, 2018 at 1:50 PM
A good question...no one came back to report...All the best Curtis
Cunningham Avatar
May 30, 2018 at 1:36 PM
Lovely monoku Curtis, a lot said in a few words. Good luck. Tom
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