Your My Greatest Gift

I'm not able to hold in these rabid emotions. This razor cuts deeper than any ocean. I
cant describe my love and my hate combined, so I wish it can be just you and I. Your the
reason im able to move on. So I ignore false conclusions drawn. I can pronounce the
greatest gift is the indwelling of your radiant love. 
  This is why I sincerely believe your from up above. When we embrace it feels like im
outside of time and of space. Every time i wake up i look forward to seeing your
omnipresent face. I dread when we have to say goodbye, id give anything for just a few
more minutes of staring into your glistening eyes. Be silent and be still, hold my hand if
you will. 
  This everlasting bond makes me tightly hold on, its perfectly fine if you don't want to
respond. Oh, how I long to hold you in my arms, oh how id love to lie with you and glare
upon the infinite stars. we've come way too far to disembark. I dwell in your heart, since
the start, to the death, i will give you my very last breath.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008


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Date: 9/4/2008 7:14:00 AM
thanks a lot :)
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Date: 9/3/2008 9:21:00 AM
A lot of feeling in this. The razor helps ease the other pain but there are alternatives, like writing poetry. God Bless. Vince
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