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Your Moon, My Ocean

Your Moon, My Ocean Should I compare your love to the ocean? One heart beating with such fluid motion, with such smooth waves flowing from the sea. Their white trickling foam washing over me. Till your soft currents drag me out to you, floating peacefully on soft shades of blue. But if you're my ocean than I'll be your moon, Looking down from the sky bright at night's noon. With my heart beating strong to give you light, Till the sun comes to bring an end to night. Though that's the moment most precious of all, cause as the sun rises, I get to fall, fall towards my ocean till our lips meet! My Sea, falling in love has been so sweet CMS

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Date: 5/7/2012 6:56:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this one..Very creative work..Sara
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Date: 5/7/2012 6:23:00 AM
Caleb good imagery..David
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