Your Moon

Your moon shines tonight, 
Delivering trust.

And about my lips,
Blows a gentle breeze
Whispering to me.
I see you walking,
Amongst the soft leaves.

Spirits merge,
I have waited for so long,
Almost forgetting, 
This is possible.
Your moon, our moon
I see differently now.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Neels Avatar
December 3, 2010 at 10:16 PM
A very romantic and beautiful write.. I love how you ended it David ;-) Wilma
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November 28, 2010 at 12:38 AM
Deeply romantic David .. luv the lilting lines of luv encased in your poetry tonight my friend.. thankxx for your warm and oh so welcome comments on my poetry .. enjoy seeing your name all the time luv... happy Sunday with luv..
Wellington Avatar
November 27, 2010 at 11:21 PM
Are all the Davids filled with poetic words that charms? Don't ask me why I said that...go figure. Lovely write sir. Blessings Joy (Jew)
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November 27, 2010 at 10:05 PM
beautiful and lovely write~ 'take care *luv~SKAT
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