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Your Moon

Your moon shines tonight, Delivering trust. And about my lips, Blows a gentle breeze Whispering to me. I see you walking, Amongst the soft leaves. Spirits merge, I have waited for so long, Almost forgetting, This is possible. Your moon, our moon I see differently now.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/3/2010 10:16:00 PM
A very romantic and beautiful write.. I love how you ended it David ;-) Wilma
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Date: 11/28/2010 12:38:00 AM
Deeply romantic David .. luv the lilting lines of luv encased in your poetry tonight my friend.. thankxx for your warm and oh so welcome comments on my poetry .. enjoy seeing your name all the time luv... happy Sunday with luv..
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Date: 11/27/2010 11:21:00 PM
Are all the Davids filled with poetic words that charms? Don't ask me why I said that...go figure. Lovely write sir. Blessings Joy (Jew)
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Date: 11/27/2010 10:05:00 PM
beautiful and lovely write~ 'take care *luv~SKAT
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