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Your Mind

Why the method? Why the hiding? Was it something I was not abiding? I am lost and a little bit unsure. What kind of animal makes me endure? I am not your enemy. How could you believe such lies? At the bottom of your heart is it truly me you despise? I count the days 'till this is all left behind. But it's hard to live without knowing your mind.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/13/2010 12:11:00 PM

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/12/2010 5:17:00 PM

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Susan Palli

Date: 12/12/2010 5:43:00 AM

can feel the doubt, can feel the frustration

Jancarl Campi

Date: 12/12/2010 2:09:00 AM

Who knows what lurks in the minds of others? It seems like you have a tough nut to crack here. The second line of your second verse says it all. The best solution may be> just find another.