Your Loving Arms
You holding my hand
isnt just a feeling
it isnt just grand
it makes me feel loved
instead of just feeling
pushed and then shoved.
when were not together
i feel like half of me is gone
its like you left me
and will be back at dawn.
when im with you
time just goes by so quick,
man, i am one lucky chick.
your such a great guy
everything about you is great
i would never leave you
thats a risk i cant take.
your too wonderful to lose
i know your family
would agree with me too.
i hope we stay together
longer than forever
that would be a dream come true
if only every girl could be as lucky
and have a great guy like you.
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