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Your Loving Arms

You holding my hand isnt just a feeling it isnt just grand it makes me feel loved instead of just feeling pushed and then shoved. when were not together i feel like half of me is gone its like you left me and will be back at dawn. when im with you time just goes by so quick, man, i am one lucky chick. your such a great guy everything about you is great i would never leave you thats a risk i cant take. your too wonderful to lose i know your family would agree with me too. i hope we stay together longer than forever that would be a dream come true if only every girl could be as lucky and have a great guy like you.

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Date: 2/14/2011 11:23:00 AM
It's a good shot Preece. I believe you can come up with something more deep and moving. Keep the flag flying. bakare oluwaseun
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Date: 2/9/2011 11:50:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Tasha. I know this is a late welcome but, I have some very pressing matters going on at the present time. I hope to be back and at full speed in the next couple of weeks. Until then please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/5/2011 3:32:00 PM
this is called love n it sounds so true but this is a good piece n i bet that they are glad that they have u
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Date: 2/5/2011 1:39:00 PM
a lucky girl she seems:), every girl deserves that one great guy, enjoyed,..p.d.
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Date: 2/5/2011 12:29:00 PM
Sweet romantic write with your heart as your pen... love you thoughts in this write...Michael
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