Your Love Remains Incomparable

Being thirsty for long,when falls on earth the first drop of season
 To be in love with the rain,God gave it the reason.
 I can compare my love with that earth and rain,
 because in the same way you give that calmness to my heart & brain.
 
When the water comes from a height and falls into the river,
 the river opens her arm to stay then & forever together.
 I can compare my love with that fall and river,
 because in the same way in your arm i feel secure forever.
 
Making itself so hard,just to protect its flower
 the thorn in this sacrificing way,the love it shower.
 I can compare my love with that thorn and flower,
 because in the same way,to fulfill my desires your dreams you shatter.
 
With that fast blowing wind,a leaf flies away
 without knowing where to go,in this way its commitment it say.
 I can compare my love with that wind and leaf,
 because in the same way,I have in you that unconditional belief.
 
Even after comparing with many, incomparable & incredible your love remains
 I am the luckiest to be in that happiness so dense.
 Wherever i find love,there i find only you,
 really to get something so precious,there are fortunate very few.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 4/26/2011 11:16:00 AM
Very nice poem...welcome to PS...Jimmy
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