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Your Love Is My Snow Flake

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My love for you, now, is a new flake of snow, It began on a cold winter’s night. Love’s arms surrounded the insides of me, And my heart they did sweetly ignite. Igniting to delicate, precise and so tender, A matrix in which I am trapped. My heart wants for you, its passion and lust, Your snow has me cloaked, has me wrapped. Encased on a mountain our love sits unique, Other love seems so common and trite. Our love is the beautiful sparkling snow flake, Lighting our hearts to a wonderful bright.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 8/11/2016 10:12:00 PM
Lighting our hearts to a wonderful bright. If you were my Ace, I would say: So let them ignite.
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Lewis Raynes
Date: 8/11/2016 10:40:00 PM
share the love :)
Date: 8/3/2016 1:59:00 AM
Very unique, Lewis - I enjoyed your originality in this piece very much ... CayCay
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Date: 8/11/2016 10:40:00 PM
thanks CayCay

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