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Your Love Is My Rum

What is more endearing than your love?
life,
haven,
or beauty?
none I have seen!

Your love is my rum,
It turns loath into a goat of arms,
my demons into diamonds,
and my scares into stars

Your love is my rum,
and also a mum to my grace

This makes me feel like a baby rabbit that move around the orbit of love

Your love is my rum,
It makes my sorrow numbly drunk,
and renders death, worthless 

Your love is my rum,
It sets me aglow, 
and warmly flows twinkles of wealth and health into the nose of my bones 

Your love is my rum,
because every wink from you;
sinks my perception and 
shocks my blood
this makes me drizzly fidget in love 

Your love is my rum, 
because I am always drunk in your rare love 
and your rare love transforms my sea of hate into a tea of fate 

Your love is my rum,
because it turns my nun heart, 
into a tomboy, when it notices your mum and yummy presences
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Falgout Avatar
September 18, 2012 at 9:19 PM
Another great poem, love your rum, hugsss debra
Oloidi Avatar
October 11, 2012 at 5:29 AM
Thanks Debra for ur kind words!!! Full 360 degree hugs from me! Lol. Take care
Komala Avatar
August 19, 2012 at 5:43 AM
So romantic Femi JO,,,great work:) nice share,,,thank you :)) SL
Oloidi Avatar
October 11, 2012 at 5:24 AM
Thanks komala, I guess I'm a very super romantic person...it shows in my writting right? lol. Thanks..
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